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Stream of Consciousness

Perhaps It's A Little On The Nose

By Hope MartinPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Stream of Consciousness
Photo by Nastia Petruk on Unsplash

Float, float, float your boat, quietly down the stream,

Carefully, carefully, carefully we don't want to sink!

Deep, dark, stark is the vicious undertow

waiting, waiting, waiting to strip your flesh to bone!

Every dark, cruel and poisonous thought is waiting underneath,

the glass-like surface that reflects your every thought and dream!

Deep, deep, deep it goes through your very soul,

the waters cold, the night is dark, and you are on your own!

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About the Creator

Hope Martin

Find my fantasy book "Memoirs of the In-Between" on Amazon in paperback, eBook, and hardback, in the Apple Store, or on the Campfire Reading app.

Follow the Memoirs Facebook age here!

I am a mother, a homesteader, and an abuse survivor.

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  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Precisely "Grey's Anatomy dark and twisty." Tis the season. Yikes!

  • Jaye Pool2 years ago

    I love the dark direction this took!

  • Oooo, I loveeeeee the dark twist to this! Hehehehehe

  • Katarzyna Popiel2 years ago

    Nice one but I wasn't able to read it... The melody was getting in the way. It just has to be sung!

  • Thoughts people? Thinking of doing an audio reading of this out loud in the creepiest voices ever...?

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 years ago

    So grim and heavy, wonderfully composed- a darkly beautiful reflection on all-consuming fears!

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