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The Last Bite

For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge.

By Tim CarmichaelPublished about 9 hours ago 1 min read
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Dad brought home extra meat and said it was cheap. It tasted fine, just sweeter than usual. A week later, missing posters went up. Last night, I found a fingernail in my steak. I heard footsteps upstairs, and he whispered, “Did you finish everything on your plate?”

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Tiffany Gordonabout 4 hours ago

    WOW! Well done Tim!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout 4 hours ago

    perfect

  • Mariann Carrollabout 6 hours ago

    Oh may! I would start throwing up. Awesome, entry to the Challenge.

  • Sara Wilsonabout 7 hours ago

    😱😱😱

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