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The last crusade of Antonius

I've been meaning to watch The Seventh Seal for years. Finally did and got a new poem out of it.

By Roderick MakimPublished 5 days ago 1 min read
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In this empty forest

Full of silence

And awful discovery

Nothing moves

But for chequered stratagem

Looking for one last sign

Of wingéd seraphim

Painted proofs of a

Suffering God or

Even a single, simple

Seance with

Lucifer, forever alone,

The only one

Who might know.

...

No wind

No sound

No voice

But your own

In the darkness.

...

Suddenly a terrible

Light

Looms above the forest

And sounds to stop

Your heart, more awful

Than even silence

Sends you fleeing back

To the stonewall safety of

Darkness, your hands find

A fallen branch

Damp with death

Dirt and decay

In your own hands

This fallen wormwood

Wards away

The terrible sound

And burns the light

The grey.

...

With your own hands

...

Carve an idol

Of your fear

And call it

God.

artFree VerseStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetry

About the Creator

Roderick Makim

Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.

I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.

For more: www.roderickmakim.com

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