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Crimson whispers fall,
soft breath carries gold away,
silence holds the dusk.
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Tim Carmichael
Iβm a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link π
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I love the soft touch this brings. The whisper very much in line. With the soft delivery and the meaning. The breath carrying the gold. I like that. I like how silence was personified. The hand holding the dusk makes the world feel β and it is β feels so vast. All the very best of luck on the challenge Tim π€β€οΈ
This is perfect. Sounds like a gentle autumn breeze
Crimson whispers falling, I love that!
That is some vivid imagery, great use of sound