
you can’t leave that here
not in and so it’s not on
so why do i care?
About the Creator
Bren
“I know what I mean it to be and respect that someone else may read something entirely different.”
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

you can’t leave that here
not in and so it’s not on
so why do i care?
“I know what I mean it to be and respect that someone else may read something entirely different.”
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
Comments (2)
I really like the final line, so why do i care? It opens the poem outward, inviting the reader into that same moment of self-questioning. There’s a softness to it, almost like catching yourself mid thought, and that gentle uncertainty gives the haiku its lingering impact.
Too much junk in the trunk