Trason's Fit... (Revamped Monologue In 47 Words)
"For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge."
By Tiffany GordonPublished 10 days ago • 1 min read
Photo by CHUTTERSNAP on Unsplash
My Entry:
This morning while eating, my son Trason insisted that his food had been poisoned and proceeded to throw his plate of grits at the wall so hard that it fractured into itty-bitty pieces. If I don't do something about things soon, I could be his next target.
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Comments (21)
Haha that little tyke! Congratulations on Leaderboard 💰
Yikes! 😳 I need to check out this challenge. 😊
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations Leaderboard 🎊 🎊
Congrats on your leaderboard placement, Tiffany!!
Sounds like Trason is having some trust issues. Hope he can get some help soon. Those poor grits... If you can't tell, I love grits! 😁
Fun read! Great job. 💜
Well done, Tiff!!! I hope that Trason’s mom is not the next target. It’s bad enough that the wall has fractured into pieces! Good storytelling!
Travon needs a good butt whipping, grandma style. But u probably gonna pay for a shrink instead. Old way was better. Cheaper.
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Back in the day we only needed a look from the grammas and parents to cease and desist. Now, its prison stuff if you discipline. oh deah. Well done in 47 words.
Great 47 word short story for the challenge!💕
Before you become his target. Make him your target 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ooft! Hard relate here ✨💖
It sounds like he was really struggling in that moment :-(
I see! From your piece on a veteran struggling with mental health after coming back from war. (I read the comments :) Timely topic with so much damage to so many people's mental and emotional health with all those wars going on.
To poison or not to poison. Great entry!
Completely precise on many levels! well done : 0
Great one 😉🫨❤️❤️❤️
This is such a deep piece 💝
but was it....? was it poisoned?